Wednesday, March 6, 2013
First Impressions
Flash Fiction (up to 500 words) to the prompt "Suitably Warm":
His
mother’s voice was suitably warm when she greeted them at the door, but in the
arch of her brow he detected a chill appraisal of his dinner companion. He’d
anticipated as much when he’d picked Gillian up. The coyly torn fishnets and plaid,
schoolgirl skirt, the black choker that showed off the slenderness of her neck,
these were fine and fetching for a night on the town, but for meeting his
parents for the first time? Ah, well, he supposed she was just being herself.
Their
arrival roughly a half an hour later than arranged had the desired effect of
circumventing an awkward session in the sitting room. They went straight from
the front door to the table, where his father already sat, that morning’s newspaper
folded open to the crossword on his placemat, a stub of pencil in hand.
“This
is my pop. Pop, this is Gillian.”
His
father looked up and offered a hollow hello.
“I
love crosswords,” chirped Gillian. “Give us a clue.”
“Tart!”
blurted his father.
“Howard!”
his mother exclaimed.
“Five
letters, ends in ‘y’,” his father finished.
“Put
the crossword away, Howard,” said his mother sharply, covering for her
misunderstanding. “We’ll eat in five minutes. I’ll just fetch the kids.” She
left the room and they heard her heels on the wooden staircase.
“She
thought I meant you!” stage-whispered his father, giving Gillian a broad wink
over his reading glasses.
“Tangy,”
said Gillian, as she plopped pertly into the chair he held for her.
His
father hitched up his spectacles and frowned at the crossword a moment.
“Brilliant!”
he pronounced.
A
tumble of footfalls preceded the twins’ headlong entrance into the dining room.
Their elder sister came closely behind them, as if she were driving cattle. The
three of them silently took their seats and stared shamelessly at Gillian.
“One of them is Daniel, and the other one is
Dennis,” he told Gillian, pretending as usual that he couldn’t tell his
brothers apart. “And she’s Denice. Hi, Denice. This is Gillian.”
“Hi…”
said Denice, as if about to ask a question but thinking better of it.
“Pleased
to meet you all,” said Gillian. “Denice, I hear you’re driving now.”
“When
anybody will let me,” said Denise with a pointed look in her father’s
direction.
“You’ve
got to let her practice, Pop,” he said.
“You
take her,” his father suggested, stashing the crossword and pencil under his
chair as his mother entered from the kitchen carrying three big bowls at once.
“Mom!”
he exclaimed, lurching to his feet and going to her aid.
“I’ll
get the plates,” said Denice. “You two make yourselves useful and bring
everyone a glass.”
“Is
milk alright, Gillian?” asked his mother.
“Sure,
I like milk.”
“Howard,
dear, will you bring in the ham?”
As
the family bustled to get the meal underway, Gillian marveled at the grand production
of it all. The only child of a workaholic widower, her usual dining experience
was Kraft Macaroni and Cheese over the sink.
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